Throughout the wonderful scheme of things you get an A+ just for hard work. Exactly where you confused everybody was first in all the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct at this point. Having said that, let me tell you just what exactly did work. The writing can be incredibly engaging and this is most likely why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not convinced of how you seem to connect your ideas which produce your conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point however trust in the foreseeable future you actually link your dots better.