In this wonderful scheme of things you actually get an A just for effort. Exactly where you confused us was in the facts. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more correct here. Having said that, permit me inform you precisely what did work. Your text is quite engaging which is probably the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can see the jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you appear to unite the details that make the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but wish in the future you actually connect the dots better.