In the grand scheme of things you'll receive a B+ for hard work. Where you actually lost everybody was first in your specifics. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me say to you just what exactly did give good results. Your authoring is definitely highly powerful and that is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can see the jumps in logic you make, I am not sure of how you seem to connect your ideas that help to make your final result. For right now I will subscribe to your issue but trust in the near future you connect the dots better.