Throughout the amazing design of things you'll secure a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where you actually lost me personally was first on the particulars. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you exactly what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is quite powerful which is possibly why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can certainly see a leaps in logic you make, I am not convinced of how you seem to connect your details that produce the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point however trust in the future you actually link your dots better.