In the grand design of things you'll get a B- just for effort. Where you lost everybody was on all the facts. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, allow me inform you just what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is actually quite persuasive and that is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can notice the leaps in reason you make, I am definitely not certain of exactly how you seem to connect your points that make the final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point however hope in the future you connect your facts better.