Throughout the wonderful design of things you'll receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually lost us was first on your facts. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, permit me tell you just what exactly did do the job. Your text is certainly rather persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can certainly see a leaps in logic you make, I am not really sure of exactly how you appear to connect your details that produce the actual conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however trust in the future you actually connect the dots better.