In this grand scheme of things you'll secure an A just for hard work. Exactly where you actually lost me ended up being on your facts. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you exactly what did deliver the results. Your article (parts of it) can be pretty powerful and that is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can easily notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not really sure of exactly how you appear to unite your details that make the final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your point but wish in the foreseeable future you link the facts better.