Throughout this grand pattern of things you receive an A+ just for effort. Where you lost everybody was on all the facts. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, allow me inform you what did work. The text is definitely really persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, although I can easily notice the jumps in reason you make, I am not sure of exactly how you seem to connect your details which in turn make your conclusion. For now I shall yield to your position however trust in the foreseeable future you actually connect your facts better.