In this amazing scheme of things you receive a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where you lost everybody was in all the specifics. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct in this article. Having said that, permit me tell you just what did do the job. Your article (parts of it) is certainly extremely persuasive and this is probably why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can notice the jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily certain of exactly how you seem to connect your ideas which in turn help to make the conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your point but trust in the foreseeable future you actually connect the dots better.