In the wonderful scheme of things you secure an A for hard work. Where you lost me was first on the specifics. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more true here. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did give good results. Your writing can be rather powerful and this is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can easily notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of exactly how you seem to unite the details that produce the actual final result. For right now I will subscribe to your issue but hope in the near future you actually link the facts better.